My poems

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Saturday, October 29, 2011

Triveni Sangam




Kehate hai is jagha ko sangam,
teen nadiyo ka hota milan.
Ganga,Yamuna or Saraswati,
teeno nadiya milti yahi.

Kahan kahan se aati hai,
meelo ka safar karti hai.
Ganga to bahati aati hai,
pass yamuna gehari aati hai.

Devatao or Danavo ki larhai main,
gira tha amrit yahain.
Is jagha pe nahate, 
dhul jate sub paap yahain.
  
Trivani, Prayag ya Allahabad naam hai, 
aye the yaha Baghvan Ram bhi. 
12 varsh ke baad aata yaha,
 Kumb ka mela lagata jaha.

Ganga ka paani peela,
yamuna ka paani neela.
Ganga ki gehari 4 feet,
yahuma ki hai 40 feet.

Ganga bahate saaf sutheri aage,
peelapan chor jaati piche.
Kashtiyo pe savaar hoke,
log aate hain sangam pe.

Triveni pe unchi jagha bani,
log  nahate, paap dhote. 
Swarg ki manokamna karte,
aapna mael piche chorte

Hum bhi aye the yaha,
bus kuch saal pahale.
Nahaye nahi yaha hum to,
bus pranaam keya Ganga ji ko. 

renukakkar 29.10.2011
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Friday, October 28, 2011

A different type of homework



Being a science student I attended cookery class for only one term (3 months) in Class 8th...This poem is a small contribution for the Cookery Class when we had to make Cookies at home and take them to school for checking/inspection :) I have tried to make it a funny poem :)





I was given homework to do,
a good presentation I made.
Next day I showed it too,
all my friends really admired.

My teacher came to inspect,
surprisingly she sniffed it like a puppy.
then she took a small bit,
chewing it and looked happy.

She took another bigger piece,
munching away and smiling.
I watched not feeling nice,
seeing my homework disappearing.

Soon she had finished it all,
I stood with my mouth agape.
My homework seems to be vitamins full,
that a teacher ate it with a burp?

Normal is marking of assignment to make you pass,
What of tasting and then eating your homework ?
Your marking is done like this in class !
in cookery class the teacher eats your work. :) 

renukakkar 28.10.2011
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Sunday, October 23, 2011

A sweet song of love



Listen to this sweet song of love, 
a different  love song of our strife.
The victory of truth in life, 
listen to this sweet song of love.... 

Walking together in our dreams where have we reached,
just look how blue is the sky here.
Our song is even sung by the birds here,
where ever our eyes can see is pure light spread.

Listen to this sweet song of love, 
a different  love song of our strife.
The victory of truth in life, 
listen to this sweet song of love.... 

Cool cool breezes blow here always, 
beyond the stars is our little cottage.
The rainbow colours are here to manage,
they where they commence their journeyof joys.

Listen to this sweet song of love, 
a different  love song of our strife.
The victory of truth in life, 
listen to this sweet song of love.... 

Forbidden to meet each other in this world,
encircled within our customs were we both.
imprisoned and guarded were we both,
we died in breaking away from the customs of this world.  

Listen to this sweet song of love, 
a different  love song of our strife.
The victory of truth in life, 
listen to this sweet song of love.... 

renukakkar 23.10.2011
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pyar ka sureela geet



Suno  tum pyar ka ek sureela geet, 
hum dono ki kahani ka anokha sangeet.
zindagi main sachaye ki jeet, 
suno tum pyar ka ek sureela geet.... 

Sapno main chalte chalte aa gaye hum kahan,
Dekho bahut hi neela hai yahan ka aasman.
punchi bhi gaa rahe humare hi nagme yahan, 
puri dunyia main chaya hai noor dekho jahan.

Suno tum pyar ka ek sureela geet, 
hum dono ki kahani ka anokha sangeet.
zindagi main sachaye ki jeet, 
suno tum pyar ka ek sureela geet.... 

Thandi thandi chalti hai hawaye yehan, 
taro se aage hai humara aashyian.
Inderdanyush ki jaha hoti rangeeniyan,
yeah sub shuru hoti hai yahan.

Suno tum pyar ka ek sureela geet, 
hum dono ki kahani ka anokha sangeet.
Zindagi main sachaye ki jeet, 
suno tum pyar ka ek sureela geet.... 

mannayee thi milne pe duniya main hum dono ko,
maryada ke dayare main jakhre thae hum dono.
paharho main pakare  thae hum dono.
zindagai gawayi jub torha in maryadao ko.  

Suno tum pyar ka ek sureela geet, 
hum dono ki kahani ka anokha sangeet.
Zindagi main sachaye ki jeet, 
suno tum pyar ka ek sureela geet.... 

renukakkar 23.10.2011
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